- Karaoke scenes
- Red converse sneakers
- Overly clumsy Bella
- Hyperactive high pitched annoying Alice
- Couples falling in love instantly
- Then that love instantly fixes everything
- Promiscuous Bella still being "tight"
- Innocent Bella magically having porn star qualities
- Marathon sex
- Virgin Bella having an orgasmic first time
- Siblings inquiring about each others sex lives
- Multi-million dollar vehicles
- No backbone Bella
- Bossy Alice
- When an author doesn't know her characters
- Or remember basic information inserted in previous chapters
- Example: Side characters finally getting together that night then in future chapters having them together since high school
- Or remember basic information inserted in previous chapters
may 18 2010 ∞
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