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• contrast across panels
  • size in main type
• legibility
• gif

1

• add blue
• lighter 2ndary type?
• bg type --> more contrast with bg

2

• rougher textures on computer
• darken white of newspaper --> legibility
• blow some type up a lot bigger
• fix color overlay mask

3

• bigger top type?
• fix B --> photo tension

4

• make b capital --> legibility
• make biggest type across panels

5

• prey: "e" more solid
• play with opacity of smaller type/contrast against bg
• rearrange arrows
• continuity with 6

6

• continuity with 5

7

• fix illegibility