- hyphens:
- No hyphen is called for in a compound modifier with an “-ly” adverb ("politically charged cases")
- "After ten and a half years"
- "one-on-one interpersonal conflict"
- may vs might:
- contrary-to-fact hypothetical: "might have", not "may have"
- "Genetic analysis […] hints that the prehistoric world may have been filled with "hybrid" humans"
- verb: lie
- "has turned and lain down" (here, we need the past participle of “lie,” not of “lay”)
- "After a week of lying low"
- singular / plural
- "one of the areas that were hit hardest" / "one of the hardest-hit areas."
- possessives, etc.:
- "In precise usage, the gerund “blowing” should be used with a possessive; make it “without their blowing up.” (Another fix would be “without having them blow up.”)"
- "her_ and Mr. Shawn’s"
- "said of himself and his main partner"
- prepositions, conjunctions:
- " As he did in […] with much success,"
- "in about two dozen _ districts"
- "who make up about 8 percent of the population"
- "produces more of the fruit than any other country in the world"
- "not alone in thinking a deal was not far off."
- "A surprisingly common word mix-up"
- " defuse concerns" (because “diffuse” means scatter or spread out)
- "The concept of “year” is inherent in “anniversary,” so “two-year anniversary” is redundant. Make it “second anniversary.”"
- "was nearing a peak / climax" ("a crescendo is not a peak of intensity but a gradual increase in force, intensity or loudness")
- torte vs tort
- uninterested vs disinterested ("An uninterested person is bored, unconcerned, or indifferent; a disinterested person is impartial, unbiased, or has no stake in the outcome.")
- flair (aptitude) vs flare (a sudden blaze or burst of flame, a type of pyrotechnic or a verb)
- fewer / less
- "“Eight hours” is used to describe an extent of time, not to enumerate the individual hours. So despite the plural, it should be “less than eight hours."
- "Normally “fewer” is correct with a plural, countable noun. But an expression like this is intended to describe an extent of time, not a number of individual months. So “less” is correct – “less than a month,” “less than a year,” “less than 18 months.”
- "as no less than nine"
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