- Work on Scottish history essay/future thesis idea
- Plan out better
- Flow better
- Better sources and sourceing
- Add Margaret Tudor (perfect example)
- Add Mary I?
- Better conclusion
- Carry thought throughout the essay - Conclusion and Intorduction should have similar points
- But the conclusion should expand on the similar points and draw a conclusion over the span of 11th century to 16th century
jun 2 2010 ∞
jun 9 2010 +