The Vagabond Tweets

• Come up with a better title/Twitter account name
  • Play on homelessness - give it humor like "Sh*t My Dad Says*
• Heighten the stakes for everyone
  • Specify what is at stake if June lets Lyonel stay? If Bradley does?
• Improve flow of the scenes--keep the ball in the air instead of letting it drop
• What is the MDQ?
  • Make sure it gets answered by the end of the play.
• What am I trying to say about Bradley and June's world views?
  • Give them very specific, idiosyncratic belief systems that they reveal over the course of the play.
• Use more interesting anecdotes and non-sequiteurs instead of being so blunt.
• Specify character relationships.
• What is Lyonel like? Be more clear about why he uses certain behaviors.
• ADD MORE PASSION.
• First scene needs more of a spark or a hook--needs to be more compelling, raise questions or strong opinions about the characters.