criticism

• sentences drag on for too long—the whole thing becomes a chore to read.
• strays away from subtopic/point of the paragraph.
• subconsciously uses highfalutin words when not necessary.
• vague buildup from a lack of actual understanding. basically bullshitting.

these are the same problems your articles and essays from four to six years ago had. the fact that they're still prevalent in your writing is troubling.

good points

• your best works are from exam essays?