• use parallelism
  • use consistent point of view
    • verb tenses
    • correct pronouns
  • use specific and concrete words
    • create pictures in minds
    • use exact names
    • use lively/active verbs
    • use descriptive words or modifiers
    • use words that relate to the senses
  • use concise words
    • omit unnecessary words
  • vary sentences to make it less blah
    • stop monotony!
nov 25 2008 ∞
dec 13 2008 +