• amaya should be more raunchy
  • extra scene with ace
  • how can make her more likeable?
  • illusion to notebook more often
  • matthias's introduction be earlier
  • section to explain the title
  • should i mention that they are asian?
  • slumber party with amaya
  • take out divorce stuff
  • who's story is this?
dec 30 2013 ∞
jan 6 2014 +