- amaya should be more raunchy
- extra scene with ace
- how can make her more likeable?
- illusion to notebook more often
- matthias's introduction be earlier
- section to explain the title
- should i mention that they are asian?
- slumber party with amaya
- take out divorce stuff
- who's story is this?
dec 30 2013 ∞
jan 6 2014 +