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- "Your examples are sound, the clearly support your point, and you provide adequate detail." — sobre meu paragrafo sobre as tribos Tupís
- "Great story and extremely well written. I enjoyed reading this." — Clarke (também parabenizou meu conto na frente da classe)
- "You're doing great. Keep up the hard work!" "Very good descriptions." "Wonderful imagery!"
- "This is very good work, Luiza. Congratulations! Excellent opening to the paragraph."
- "Such very good work! Congratulations! As you can see, from my point of view, there are no corrections to be made." — Charles
- "Excellent overall Luiza. I like how much textual evidence you used in this paragraph and how you used organizational techniques to carefully lay out your perspective."
- "Luiza, you have a strong paper. You bravely discussed a very important topic. Your solutions are thoughtful and your paper is organized well." "This is a very powerful opening. Good job engaging your reader!" "Your call for action to correct the problem is clear, and I can hear the passion in your voice." — sobre meu texto que relacionava a saúde pública com a cultura do estupro
- "O seu primeiro paragrafo ficou adorável." — Maria Catarina
- "A resposta da Luiza foi definitivamente a melhor de todas dos 1ºs que eu li. Você escreve muito bem e você realmente entendeu a pergunta. Você tem muito conhecimento e é, por isso, que você fica confusa com os testes e não acerta todos. Parabéns e continue assim." — Jaqueline sobre minha resposta na prova final
- "This is a great paragraph, Luiza! I really like the angle on which you focus your writing to support the benefits of social media! You are consistent with your support throughout your paragraph, and you thoughts are very well developed!" — sobre meu parágrafo sobre mídias sociais (ela também me deu dois pontos extras por fazer o argumento decisivo se relacionar com a pergunta "so what?" de uma maneira especialmente forte)
- "Luiza, I really enjoyed your essay! I was especially impressed by your honesty and interested in your mindfulness paragraph." — sobre minha ted talk
- "Hi Luiza. =) I really enjoyed your soliloquy. You had a strong start with a question and some powerful imagery. You kept the intensity up with the heavy feeling of guilt and more imagery and symbols to make it even more powerful. Good work!" — sobre meu solilóquio de macbeth
- "Very good descriptions of the characters!" — sobre o meu conto
- "Luiza, it looks like you are on your way to being a very skilled writer. I really liked your complex sentence structures and the range of word choices." — sobre a minha análise literária sobre "The Cask of Amontilado" e "The Open Window"
- "This essay was very well done and enjoyable to read. I especially liked that you included many references to the text in order to back up your assertions and that you extended the theme of the story to the reader's experience." — sobre meu texto relacionando a importância da educação com "Animal Farm"
mar 25 2016 ∞
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